The same error is in the suggested change. Needs ‘or’ before ‘gender based’
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On Oct 10, 2018, at 7:58 PM, Sharon Villines via Groups.Io <email@example.com> wrote:
Date: Wed, 10 Oct 2018 20:28:11 EDT
On Wed, Oct 10, 2018 at 11:55 AM, Sharon Villines wrote:
There will be no racial, ethnic, gender based insults or any other personal discriminations.
Unfortunately I don't have time to proof-read the whole thing, but the sentence above stands out for its lack of the word "or" before "gender based." It's an actual grammatical error. And unfortunately, I didn’t write that sentence. I suggested:
There would also preferably be a comma after "insults," but that lack is a matter of preference rather than correctness. The term "personal discriminations" also seems a bit odd. But those two are minor compared to the grammatical error.
Racial, ethnic, gender based insults, or any other personal discriminations will not be tolerated and can lead to …Gender based should have a en dash.
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